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　　WRITING

　　PART ONE

　　You are the Managing Director of a #pany whose profits have recently

　　increased and you would like to reward staff for this.

　　Write a memo to all staff:

• 　　thanking them for their contribution
• 　　explaining why profits increased
• 　　telling them what their reward will be.

　　Write 40-50 words.

　　MEMO

　　T0: All Staff

　　From:

　　Date: 7 December 2002

　　Subject: Staff Reward

　　_____________________________________________________

　　_____________________________________________________

　　_____________________________________________________

　　_____________________________________________________

　　_____________________________________________________

　　Samples:

　　Sample A

　　To: All Staff

　　From: Managing Director

　　Date: 7 December

　　Subject: Staff reward

　　I would like to thank you for the contribution in increasing the #pany’s profit. The profit increased due to very hard work and long working hours. Each of the staff will receive an envelope with a reward on Tuesday. The reward is a trip to Hawaii, and I hope that this will be the perfect reward. Enjoy!

　　Thank you

　　Band 4

　　All points are adequately covered and developed. There is an adequate range of language, though

　　with some repetition.

　　Sample B

　　To: All Staff

　　From: Paul Blake

　　Date: 7 December 2002

　　Subject: Staff reward

　　I am very pleased to tell everybody that our #pany was make a great profit in this year.

　　Thank a lot everybody’s contribution for the #pany. Due to work hard, the management decided that every body would get the opportunity to add the salary and paid holiday.

　　Band 2

　　All the content points are addressed, although poor control of basic structures, e.g. ‘was make’, 'opportunity to add the salary’, obscure the message at times.